This blog was meant to advertise and update a series of history books published by Fluttering Wings Press. It rested unused because a history blog proved more effective. Our intent was to republish hard to find original material. We abandoned that because most of that material was digitalized by others.
Now, however, we have published the first in a series of Middle Grade/Young Adult novels. It fills a need felt by conservative Christian families who are uncomfortable with or reject totally the paranormal - Witches, shape-shifters, fairies, and similar. Falcon's Crown: Kidnapped is just adventure. Set in a medieval-like society, it tells the story of an orphaned, impoverished noble girl. She's of the Old Race, despised for that. She's also a 'sharp cookie.'
What follows is the introduction and first chapter. Comments welcome:
Queen’s Manor
House, Tabitha’s 98th Year.
In my old
age – I was born when mother was thirty-three, and she was now ninety-eight –
my family is a large one.
My sons
and daughters and their children and my brothers and sisters’ children and
grandchildren filled the manor house. Abigail Simone, one of my daughters, was
absent, not surprisingly because she was big pregnant and her counselors were
unwilling to let the Queen of the Iberians and Navarese cross stormy seas.
We were
fed and pampered by the few servants mother kept. Newsy chatter gave way to
contentment. The youngest children played and, while occasionally noisy, no one
shushed them. Annie, seven years old and my son’s youngest, was as petite as her
great grandmother and had the eyes and the red-blond hair of mother’s youth.
Mother would never own to it, but Annie is her favorite. And it was she who prompted
the whole affair.
Nestling
next to mother, looking up with pleading eyes, she asked for a story. “Gramma,
tell us a story,” she said.
“What kind
of story? Do you want the one about the giant and the egg? Or about the boy
lost on the ghostly mountain ... or ...”
“Gramma,
tell me the story of how you were kidnapped and about the bad men and about
coming here and about crossing the sea and helping great grandpa fight. And
tell me about great grandpa. I never saw him.”
“Haven’t I
told you all that before?”
“No. Parts
and bits. I want to know the whole thing.”
Few of us
knew mother’s whole story, and we all wanted to hear it.
So, to an
attentive family, she began ...
Chapter One: The Pig.
Hands on
my knees, and coughing up phlegm, I spit. Not at all a lady-like thing to do,
but though Baroness of Fens and Forest, I was not at all a lady. Not at eleven
years. Not as the daughter of a noble exiled to this place.
It was the
pig, of course. A half-grown, mischief-maker, it squeezed out of its pen,
squealing challenges as it fled. Chasing it left me mud and goo splattered. It
sheltered in a growth of brambles where I couldn’t follow. But I could and did
call down every divine curse I knew.
I was
self-absorbed and did not hear the thump of horses’ hooves on soggy pine
needles. But I felt the rider’s roughly-gloved hand grab me under my right arm
and lift me onto his horse’s back. I struggled. He thwarted me by wrapping his
arm across my chest. “Put me down this instant!” I said, speaking as regally as I knew how. “I’m
the Princess Tabitha Falcon, rightful heir to House Falcon!” I questioned his
birth’s legitimacy.
“Who put hot
spice in your porridge?” He laughed.
His
companion laughed too. “Robert, you could let the wench go,” he said “We could
say we couldn’t find her.”
I felt my
captor shake his head.
I had a
huge store of Old Race curses and imprecations learned from the Fens dwellers.
I used a few of them, calling down every imaginable divine curse.
The Robert
fellow covered my mouth with his gloved hand. I bit down as hard as I could.
For my trouble I got a mouthful of stinking, soiled leather. “Bite all you
wish,” he said. “I can’t feel it. You can chew on my finger until the end of
days, and it won’t hurt me.”
I bit
again until my teeth hurt.
“You be a
good girl, and I’ll move my hand. Will you?”
I nodded.
But when he loosened his grip, I added, “For now.”
When words
are fruitless and you can’t escape you should watch and listen. That’s what I
did.
I could
not see Robert’s companion, and because Robert held me firmly, I couldn’t see him
either. But there were things to notice. The bridle leather was new, well
worked, studded with silver. So he was either a bandit or a knight of some
sort. His horse was broad of forehead and small of muzzle. A chestnut brown,
eastern-lands horse. Expensive. The companion hummed a Northlands lullaby that
my mother used to sing, but his voice lacked a Northlands accent, and he sang
off key.
We turned
up the main forest road. This suggested three destinations. One path would lead
us to the King’s Highway. Another to the Fens, the island villages connected by
wooden causeways. The third to Clifford Castle, a ruin in the deep forest, a
habitation of outlaws and bandits. I figured my captors for bandits.
“There is
nothing with which to pay my ransom,” I whispered. Robert made me repeat it.
“Is that
what you think?”
I nodded.
He laughed. I did not relish a life as a kitchen slave or as some New Race noble’s
pet.
We turned
onto the King’s Road. This was confusing, but I was weary from pig-chasing, and
a long horseback ride always makes me sleepy. I drifted into that limp,
mindless pre-sleep state that comes just before true oblivion. It’s hard to say
how long I slept – somewhere from the second hour past noon until just before
the sun faded, waking to Robert’s strong arms lifting me from his horse.
My legs
were wobbly. I rubbed sleep from my eyes. “Where are we?” I asked.
“We’re at
God’s Pinnacle,” Robert said.
I’d been
there before, two years prior when the King called all the nobility, even the
Old Nobility, to court. That included my mother and father and me. It was an
unpleasant journey. Old Nobility suffered insult, three centuries of it made
new during that convention. We left as soon as obedience to the crown would
allow, and within the year my father was dead, killed by knights wearing the
King’s livery. And nearly a year later my older brother fled to Frankland only
to drown at sea, and mother went in her grave shortly after, her head staved
in. Though we believed she was killed at the King’s order, Old Aunt, my
guardian, never learned who did it.
“We camp
here,” he added.
His
companion had the flashing black eyes and dark hair of the New Race. He made a
fire. My stomach rumbled. “The lass’s belly complains,” he said.
“Mine too,”
Robert said. A search of his saddlebags produced dried, smoked meat and
oranges. I love oranges. He tossed one to me. I caught it one handed. He raised
his right eyebrow.
We ate in
silence. I thought of escape. Let them sleep, I thought. I’ll run. I
can use the night. But when the fire had been built up for warmth and
saddles and blankets were made into a rough bed, Robert bound my feet with a
cord and tied my right hand to his left.
I wasn’t
sleepy. I’d slept myself ‘out.’ So I lay between them, tied up as if I were the
pig I’d chased. It was demeaning, but if they meant to keep me until they could
sell me to a slave trader, this was the way to do it. I stared at the twinkling
stars, the moon, the shadows made by our diminishing fire, and listened to
their ungodly snoring.
I yanked
on the cord that tied my wrist to Robert’s. He snorted and continued to snore.
I yanked again, as hard as I could. His snores abated. There was a moment of
silence, then, “What do you want?”
“I need to
pee.”
“Pee where
you are. You can’t possibly smell worse than you do now.”
“I’m not
peeing myself! ... Besides, if I do, it will leak onto your blanket and onto
you.”
“Alright,
alright,” he said.
He scooped
me up and plopped me down a good five feet from where we lay.
“You don’t
know much about girls,” I said. “Untie my feet, and I need some privacy.”
He
grumbled but loosed my ankles, leading me to the rock that towered over us. “Back
there,” he said.
Back there
I went. I did have to pee – urgently. But just as urgently I worked at the
knotted cord. It was stubborn. If it were a stubborn man, I’d have kicked him
in his vitals. But it was a rope and not a man.
“It
doesn’t take that long.” He spoke through a yawn. A second later, he yanked on
the cord.
I gave up.
When we returned to our sleeping area, he pointed at the ground ordering me to
sit. I obeyed. He rebound my feet loosely enough to take baby steps, but not
loose enough to run.
He heard
noises – the creak of saddle leather, a horse’s snort, whispers. About time.
How deaf can one man be? I heard them a good minute before he did. Shoving me
back, he put his finger to his lips and pointed to the Pinnacle. “There,” he
whispered. “Stand there.” I did so. The only people afoot this time of night
are bandits, poachers or raiders. If that’s who we heard, I was safer with my
kidnappers than otherwise.
Robert
roused his companion; they drew swords and daggers and waited. There wasn’t
much of a wait. A young woman dressed in the padded shirt and breaches favored
by bandits and raiders stepped into the fire light.
“Gentle
knights,” she said. “We don’t want your life, just your gold.”
I stepped
forward. “Marta? Is that you, Marta?”
“Lady
Tabitha? Yes, I’m Marta. ... Why are you with these ne’er-do-wells?”
“They
kidnapped me,” I said.
“We’ll
remedy that ...”
“Excuse
me, Marta or whoever you are. We did not kidnap Princess Tabitha. She has an
appointment with the Queen. We’re helping her keep it.”
I
interrupted Robert’s nonsense with, “Marta, they’re royal knights. They wear
the king’s symbol.”
A bit of
silence followed. “We outnumber them ... significantly.” Marta addressed me,
not the ruffians who’d kidnapped me. The rustlings of many feet and bodies
hidden by the dark suggested that battle impended. Robert and his companion
tensed, ready for the onrush that must surely come.
As much as
I wished for rescue, I croaked out, “If you rush them I may be killed. Probably
will be. Let it go, Marta. I’ll find another way.”
She nodded
and slipped into the dark. We can’t call the normal night sounds silence. But
they were all I heard. My shoulder muscles relaxed and I exhaled. I found my
sleeping spot and sat. Then reclined. I slept but my kidnappers did not.
Robert
shook me awake. Yawning widely, he whispered, “We go now.”
“You
should have slept,” I said, stretching. “Marta always keeps her word.”
“You trust
bandits?”
“I
trust Marta Longsword. You should know of her, or rather of her father.”
His face
showed that he did not. But he didn’t ask, and I didn’t volunteer the
information.
He woke
his drowsing companion, calling him Fitzroi. That’s a patronymic, a last name.
It gave him a blood connection to a king; he or an ancestor was the bastard son
of one of the invader kings. This was information. The more one knows the
better armed one is.
Robert unbound
my ankles, lifting me onto his horse. I considered riding off, but it was a
momentary thought. I was still tethered to his wrist, and he would yank me off
the horse. “We walk,” he said. Fitzroi nodded.
They
didn’t walk, not even a pace forward. To our east a mounted troop, well-armed
men and women, lined the hillock’s crest. Marta was at their head and next to
her was a standard bearer. A breeze let us see the Falcon Crest. It was the
Falcon Kings’ war banner.
I was too
focused on the ragtag warriors to see what Robert did next, but I felt his
hands tug at me, pulling me off his horse. “There!” He pointed to the pinnacle.
His attention was on the twenty bandit-warriors, so I ignored him.
Marta
trotted forward, a Fens pony in tow. They’re sturdy creatures who can keep a
steady pace long after the large horses knights favored are winded. She rode
right up to Robert, forcing him back a half step. “This is for Princess
Tabitha.”
She meant
the pony, of course. He took the rope, nodding rather than saying his thanks. I
was delighted. I scampered forward and swung myself onto the pony’s back. It
snorted and nodded its head.
“I’m
riding with you,” Marta said, obviously expecting no argument.
“And they?”
Robert meant the troop of roughly-clad riders.
“They’ll
keep their distance for now,” she said.
So we rode
on, Marta at my side, and my kidnappers beside us. When we were out of the
Pinnacle’s shadow, another troop of riders was evident. For now they were our
escort. Welcome from my perspective. Very unwelcome from my kidnappers’ point
of view.
The
distance between our party and the ragged warriors who paralleled us narrowed
as we neared the royal castle. Gray, imposing, the older portion was square-towered.
It was built by my ancestors, the Falcon Kings. The newer portion and the outer
wall had round towers. It was a construct of the invader kings.
Our escort
stopped a mile or so from the main gate, but Marta rode on with us. When we
were within bow shot, she stopped. “You will see me again,” she said. “If harm
comes to Tabitha, I will repay it; insult for insult, wound for wound, scar for
scar.”
“I said it
before. Baroness Tabitha has an appointment with the Queen. Our sole intent is
to see she keeps it. On my life, she is better off here than in the hovel she
lives in.”
“I don’t
want to be here,” I said. “Our manor house is old but I’d rather be there than
here. You killed my mother and father. I do not want to be near anyone here. I will
escape.” Tough words from an eleven-year-old urchin with a noble title and
pretensions to royalty. But I spoke them earnestly.
“I have
killed no one,” Robert said, his voice quiet, gentle. “Well ... none of yours.”
“Your king
did.”
He shook
his head, sadness in his eyes. He nodded to Marta. She turned her horse, and we
rode on.
Great opening. I was reading this book to my nine year old and could tell I was starting to lose her…and then the pig entered the story! One of those books I’ll reread to her again and again as she continues to grow and mature. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI loved your writing style, full, imaginative and it paints the scene perfectly for me. The story is very engaging and i can see a huge potential for a women audience. Hope you can promote this well
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